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Wonder Woman page 4 by EliseuGouveia Wonder Woman page 4 by EliseuGouveia
At the beginning of Bioshock, you can read the words "No Gods. No Kings. Only Man."
I like that concept, because it´s exactly what i think of when I think of one of the ways I´d recreate Wonder Woman.

Step 1 - I´d get rid of the mythological greek gods.
I always thought that they steal too much protagonism from the ones who should be the real heroes of the story, the Themyscirian amazons.Why would a race of highly advanced, highly evolved immortal women worship a 3,000 years old,dead religion that revolved around adoring a bunch of self-indulging creeps?
By getting rid of them, you can attribute far more merit to the amazons who acchieved the point they are not due to some divine gift, but to the fruit of their labour, their efforts, resilience and constant thrive to evolve.
They gained immortality on their own, through their own perserverance, science or magic.
It also bears a much more empowering message than the original.
"The gods granted me immortality" VS "I gained immortality on my own."

On a sidenote, I never liked the idea of dressing the amazons in greek attire and make them worship greek gods.
The amazons were not greek, they were "the other", a tribe from central asia/eastern europe that the greek looked at with either shock, disdain or fascination. For all we know, everything they wrote about them, from killing baby boys to chopping off breasts could be just good old-fashioned mysoginistic propaganda.
So, making the amazons dress in greek fashion and worship greek gods would be akin to writing a western where native americans dress like and act like cowboys.

Step 2. I´d get rid of the queen.
I don´t like monarchies, the idea that someone is destined to rule over others because some god said so. Democracy is not perfect, but I´d choose being a citizen over being a subdict any day of the year.
My amazons are a meritocracy, a society where you advance on the merit of your contribution to society, not due to which family you were born in.


Step 3.
Which brings us to the story I had in mind.
The amazons instituted this meritocracy centuries ago, throwing the queen off her pedestal. I imagine there was likely a gruesome civil war (otherwise it would be boring) and queen Hippolyta was believed killed.
Centuries after, today, she resurfaces.
In the patriarch world.
Living with a mortal man who gave her a child, an all-american girl.
With superpowers.

Step 4.
Makiing Diana an all-american girl solves one of the problems I´ve always had with Wonder Woman: her custume. She´s not american, she´s an amazon princess and ambassador representing the proud nation of Themyscira, so why does she wear an american flag? Because she likes america? So does french president Nicholas Sarkozy, but you don´t see him drapping himself in the american flag when addressing the UN, do you?

No, my Diana was brought up by her mom, Queen Hippolyta and some yet-unnamed guy.
She learned much of the amazon ways but like any other girl, she salivated at Billy O´malley´s broad shoulders in high school.

This gives us readers an "in".
It´s hard to empathise with perfect princess from paradise land, born with a golden spoon in her mouth. But a princess fallen from grace? That´s GOLD!
It has drama, and most important it has the sense of loss that WW´s origin lacks.
A good superhero origin tale has a degree of tragedy to it.
Superman lost his homeworld. Batman lost his parents. Peter Parker could have stopped the man who killed his uncle.
And now, Diana has lost her crown.

Step 5.

I really like the idea of a fallen princess struggling to find her place in the world.
Of course she´ll eventualy return to Themyscira and there shall be much @$$tkickery.
She´ll have to face her "sisters" in the arena just like she originaly did under Marston and Perez´ pen, but this time she´s not The Special One, with powers given to her by the goddesses.
It´s another Wonder Woman pet peeve of mine.
"All amazons are special but one is more special than others."
The Contest of Champions where she faces the best of the best of the best always felt so fake to me because there is no valor in it.
Sure, an amazons can lift a car in her best day, but WW can benchpress aircraft carriers!
Where´s the fun, the challenge in that?

This way, you can finaly give the Contest of Champions the unsurmountable odds it always lacked, piting a NYPD rookie who moonlights as a superhero against seasoned, immortal amazons warriors with 3,000 years worth of combat under their belts.
I salivate at the mere thought.

Step 6.
Now of course I can already hear the DC boys groaning. "-Noooo, we can´t have a race of wimminz as powerful as Superman walking around.
Superman -> smash.
Wimminz -> kitchen."
Chill.
I´m sure one or two or twelve could occasionaly visit earth, but the vast majority of "dem wimminz" would be confined to whatever dimension Themyscira exists in, where I imagine they´d spend eternity fighting off demon creatures bent on invading earth. How´s that sound? ^_^

Step 7.
This also solves the issue of technological advancement.
Themiscira is supposed to be a highly advanced society (unless this is Amazons Attack, where they´re basicaly a bunch of idiots who spent 3,000 years riding horses because inventing flying cars was too much for their little heads) but I could never buy the idea of paradise island as an advanced society. Sorry, but if I spent my days walking at the beach at sunsets, chewing grapes and drooling at half naked women, I would have had zero incentives to develop Purple Ray emmiters.
But fighting demons for all eternity? Now there´s an incentive to evolve. ^_^
Magic, science... there´s any number of fields they could have mastered in 3,000 years.

Step 8 . Civil War
"As long as there are two men around, there will be conflict."
Same goes for women. I don´t buy the whole "there would be world peace if women were in charge".
My amazons are not a homogenous group, they are divided in factions that cohexist peacefuly. Wonder Woman would be the catalist for the rift. The extremists VS the moderates, the monarchists VS the democratis, the amazons who hate the patriarch world VS the ones who wouldn´t mind paying a visit every now and again. Some of Wonder Woman´s archenemies would in fact be amazons, following her to the patriarch world to kill her and, in the process, becoming supervillains themselves.

Point is, the amazons are a rich, untapped pool of great story material if you give them the protagonism and prominence that Zeus & company have enjoyed so far.

In the end, of course she wouldn´t regain her crown as the Princess of Themyscira.
I hate monarchies, remember?
No, in my book, they would do what Wonder Woman comics do best, the ole "come together in mutual understanding".with lots of hugs and xoxo.
The amazons would welcome her in Themyscira during summer vacations or 2 weekend per month or whatever terms of custody allowed her to dump mom and crash at aunt Kleio´s place every once in a while to learn how not to get her derrière kicked by Artemis at the arena
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:iconether101:
You should name the dad Clay.
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EliseuGouveia Mar 23, 2014  Professional General Artist
That's a very cool idea. :)
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:icongamiel:
I hope that you continue this project and I love your Nazi robot design.
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BWANASIMBA Mar 7, 2009
I read your idea for Wonder Woman and its pretty cool, but you have one mythological problem: The Amazons did worship a Greek god, ironically Ares, who was Hipployta's father. They were basically the female equivalent of the Spartans, only mating with men to make babies but usually proffering the company of women (but not always, Hippolyta herself went after the likes of Theseus and Heracles). Otherwise, interesting concept.
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EliseuGouveia Mar 8, 2009  Professional General Artist
Thank you, BwanaSimba, I have to say I didn´t know that Ares was Hippolita´s father.
That actualy opens up lots of possibilities. :)

I am not against having greek gods in WW´s adventures. In fact, when handled well, they can inspire countless storylines.

However, i do think they have too much protagonism, turning the amazons into mere pawns... which is not exactly a very empowering message.
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BWANASIMBA Mar 13, 2009
True. They do tend to play the Amazons as the proverbial pawns in the comic books.
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:icondonnat65:
I just happened to find this and I think your artwork is really good. I do love Artemis already perturbed by the arrival of Diana. I was just squeeing when I read it. I can't wait to read more!
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EliseuGouveia Nov 27, 2008  Professional General Artist
Thank you, Donnat65, I´m really glad you enjoyed my little adventure.

I don´t plan on making more of these WW pages since I am already involved in way too many projects but nevertheless I thank you for your post and kind words. :)
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EliseuGouveia Nov 13, 2008  Professional General Artist
Thank you, Uber Secret Ninja.


I would love to work on such a series myself. :D
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:iconubersecretninja:
Totally awesome!!! The depth and imagination you put in this, not to mention the artwork is really great. If this was a book, I would LOVE to buy it and enjoy it over and over again!!
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